"Horse Play" by AngelGoddess1981 0
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Horse Play consists of 38 chapters and is rated M for lemons and language.
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After
the debacle that was her relationship with Mike Newton Bella Swan decided never
to date someone she works with again. That is, until Edward Cullen comes along
and turns her world upside down. A handsome bronze-haired adonis who looks hot
by simply carrying a bale of hay from one barn to another, he seems to be from
a completely different world. In fact, his crooked smile is so mesmerizing that
Bella, an experienced and prize-winning rider, is completely captivated, loses
her balance and falls from the horse, landing hard on her side - twice!
Grumbling and determined to neither look or talk to the (cocky) guy her father
Charlie employed to help them run their ranch again, Bella retreats to
the beautiful house she lives in. After the death of her grandparents a couple
of years ago, their successful horse ranch was given to Bella's father.
Planning to once literally take over the reins and become the boss of the
beautiful piece of land she grew up on, the 25-year old young woman studied
business and put all her love and strength into helping at the ranch wherever
help was needed. And now, that sexy looking devil comes along and makes her lose
focus! Glad to finally be alone for a moment, Bella goes straight to the
bathroom to take a much needed shower and tend to her nasty bruises. She is
utterly unprepared for what awaits her behind the door: a completely naked,
breathtakingly beautiful and muscular Edward...
Embarrassed
Bella runs out of the bathroom (but not before taking a thorough look at
everything Edward has to offer) and takes a deep breath. After she's over the
initial shock, she gets extremely angry when Charlie tells her that, from now,
Edward would live with her in the big house. And even though Bella shows both
men the cold shoulder and seems to be more than upset, she is secretly excited
to have that hot piece of men sleeping just across the floor from her. It
doesn't take long for Bella to realize that he is far from being the arrogant
dick she thought he was. Instead, the young man is friendly, an amazing rider,
smart, funny, and, immensely interested in Bella and her well being. After she
once again falls from the horse, the pain is so unbearable that Edward takes
her to his father Carlisle. He diagnoses a couple of cracked ribs and orders
Bella to stay in bed for two to three weeks. Almost unable to move, she relies
heavily on Edward and can't seem to ignore her growing feelings for him
anymore. Edward also cares about her deeply but asks her to take things slow.
Instead of jumping each other's bones the first chance they get, they both want
to get to know each other a little bit better. That, and Edward is still not
entirely over the heartbreak he suffered from his previous relationship...
AngelGoddess1981 is a wonderful author whose stories always contain tons of hot lemons,
a little bit of angst, lots of sweet romance, and a bit of drama! And Horse
Play is no exception to that! Even though Bella tries to deny her feelings
for Edward in the beginning it doesn't take long for her to eventually give in.
And how could she not? Edward is everything a woman could hope for in a man:
he's intelligent, funny, incredibly sexy (especially on a horse), very romantic
(their first date is simply perfect), and, most importantly, he worships the
ground Bella walks on. Hearing why his past relationship ended is both heartbreaking
and infuriating but the showdown between Bella and Kate (Edward's ex) really
makes up for it! Horse Play is mostly written from Bella's POV but from
time to time, we get a glimpse into Edward's head as well. The story lacks
typos and grammatical mistakes and is therefore very easy to read. However, it also
includes many scenes that are neither needed by the reader to follow the character's actions nor move they the plot along. Thae result is that the storyline only progresses slowly and the fic
is very long. You’ll definitely need a while to finish it but the magical
moments between Edward and Bella are really worth it!
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