"Good Deal" by m7707 0
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Bella Swan is not popular. To be fair, it’s hard to be popular when the ice-queen of the school hates your guts. Lucky for Bella, the feeling is mutual. She hates the narcissistic Rosalie Hale and her vain posse and, more than anything, she hates Rosalie’s perfect life and her perfect boyfriend. When she sees said boyfriend, Edward Cullen, she figures that a little revenge is in order. On a whim, she pulls Edward into the back of his Volvo and gives him the best blow-job he’s ever had. After that, they fall into some sort of unspoken agreement: whenever Rosalie does something that annoys Bella, she’ll come to Edward and... works off her anger. Edward isn’t complaining - he gets more from Bella than he’s ever gotten from Rosalie. However, one day of blood-testing in Biology class and a pint of Ben & Jerry’s changes everything.
Suddenly, Bella doesn’t need Rosalie to annoy her anymore in order to get together with Edward, who is now softer and gentler with her. Their entire dynamic changes completely and they both know that it isn’t Rosalie anymore, who is "binding" them together. The more time they spend together, the more they reveal about one another, and the more they find themselves falling for each other. Soon, Edward is taking Bella out to dinner and their relationship is so different from what it was when it started. And both are only thinking one thing: it’s too good to be true. Will they be able to take it to the next level, or will their own insecurities hold them back?
Author m7707 is a personal favorite of mine. I’ve always loved her work and Good Deal is definitely no exception to that. Her writing is so smooth and sweet to read and with Good Deal, she introduces a Bella, who is completely different from those that I usually read. Because this Bella is confident, snarky, and not afraid to go after what she wants. When what she wants is to get revenge on Rosalie, things turn out for the better for both her and Edward. Edward, in this story, is a complete sweetheart. His confusion and awkwardness whenever Bella leaves after one of their rendezvous is absolutely priceless and wonderful to read. Good Deal, which is written from BPOV, is short and sweet and one of those stories that’s great for a quick read before bed. If you haven’t read it yet, you should definitely give it a try!
Good Deal consists of 10 chapters and a total of 20,978 words. This story is rated M for graphic lemons and foul language.
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