"Tube" by Annilaia 2
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After helping her friend cleaning up the mess of an amazing party, Bella finds herself waiting for her train at Ravenscourt Park station. Though the young woman works half time as a teacher at a local school, her real passion is writing. She just recently published her first book successfully and is now hastily making notes for the sequel while waiting for the tube to arrive. Once the carriages are in front of her she makes her way inside and sits down. After taking a thorough look at her fellow passengers Bella peeks through the glass window separating her carriage from the next and lays eyes upon a stunning bronze mob of hair...
Bella cannot help but stare at the gorgeous man, who is reading while listening to his ipod. It doesn't take long, however, and the object of her affection looks up and right into her eyes. He then scribbles a not on a piece of paper, holds it up and shows it to Bella. She laughs and reads that his name is Edward. The two start a sweet conversation via paper notes until Bella's station approaches and she leaves the tube to head for the connection train. It is then that she hears a wonderful velvet voice who belongs to no other but the friendly stranger with the bronze hair. Bella and Edward happen to head in the same direction and decide to spend their journey home together. And what happens the next couple of minutes is nothing short of magical...
What a wonderful and immensely well written little story! The idea of letting Edward and Bella meet on a train and communicate via notes is adorable and so, so sweet! Edward is feeling the same weird connection as Bella does and behaves slightly jealous and possessive when some teenage boys join their carriage. But Bella is far from innocent either and is not too amused to find a girl with big boobs hitting on her newfound friend! Yes, this story does not contain any lemons and, believe it or not, not a single swear word (whether there will be some kissing involved I'll let you find out yourselves). But trust me, even though this fanfic is rated K it is full of sweet young love, cute gestures, and tons of fluff!
Tube consists of five chapters and 9,580 words. The story is rated K and thus suitable for readers of all ages.
Bella cannot help but stare at the gorgeous man, who is reading while listening to his ipod. It doesn't take long, however, and the object of her affection looks up and right into her eyes. He then scribbles a not on a piece of paper, holds it up and shows it to Bella. She laughs and reads that his name is Edward. The two start a sweet conversation via paper notes until Bella's station approaches and she leaves the tube to head for the connection train. It is then that she hears a wonderful velvet voice who belongs to no other but the friendly stranger with the bronze hair. Bella and Edward happen to head in the same direction and decide to spend their journey home together. And what happens the next couple of minutes is nothing short of magical...
What a wonderful and immensely well written little story! The idea of letting Edward and Bella meet on a train and communicate via notes is adorable and so, so sweet! Edward is feeling the same weird connection as Bella does and behaves slightly jealous and possessive when some teenage boys join their carriage. But Bella is far from innocent either and is not too amused to find a girl with big boobs hitting on her newfound friend! Yes, this story does not contain any lemons and, believe it or not, not a single swear word (whether there will be some kissing involved I'll let you find out yourselves). But trust me, even though this fanfic is rated K it is full of sweet young love, cute gestures, and tons of fluff!
Tube consists of five chapters and 9,580 words. The story is rated K and thus suitable for readers of all ages.
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