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Bella Swan worked hard to get where she is today. At 25, she's already the CEO of Dwyer Holdings, a damn good architect, and the mother of an eight-month old baby boy. As she works long hours and doesn't feel comfortable in bringing her son to work, Bella hired a nanny awhile ago to take care of Connor during the day. Unfortunately, Mrs. Cope, aforementioned nanny, needs to retire for health reasons, forcing Bella to look for an adequate replacement. And so it comes that the posh Tanya is given the job as Connor's new nanny. On the evening of Tanya's first work day, an exhausted Bella comes home expecting to be welcomed by the cute and chubby face of her son. Instead she is greeted by a redheaded baby girl...

When Edward's girlfriend Victoria tells him she's pregnant, he doesn't really know what to think. He knows that she is not the woman he wants to share his life with and to start a family with her is not what he had in mind. Victoria on the other hand surprises him by admitting that she doesn't want the baby and would be willing to have an abortion. As Edward doesn't want THAT to happen he convinces her to carry the baby to the term and, just like a surrogate mother, give it to him after birth never looking back. This is how Lily comes into the life of Edward Cullen, successful architect and on the way of getting a lucrative job with Dwyer Holdings. When he asks his brother Emmett to look after his daughter for the day he had no idea what hell would break lose later on. Because instead of bringing his niece back home, he presents Edward with a sweet baby boy...

Before reading any further, I have to tell you that, although Mix Up is a really wonderful story, it also contains a number of typos and grammatical mistakes! Lots and lots of "ifs" are missing and commas are virtually nonexistent. That said, you will be able to understand the story and it won't really bother you too much. In fact, once you got used to it, you'll have a very sweet, immensely funny, and very interesting story in your hands. A story in which you have a Bella who learned early to put on the face of a cold and calculating boss in order to be accepted by the world of men she is surrounded with. It becomes apparent pretty quickly, though, that actually she is a loving and sweet young mother who is afraid of getting hurt. Enter Edward, a handsome man who understands the difficulties of being a single parent and is also persistent to get her out on a date. The two click immediately and experience some great moments together! P.S. Bella's friend Seth is hilarious!

Mix Up consists of 30 chapters and 100,413 words. The story is rated M for adult situations and foul language.

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