"Bare All" by cutestkidsmom

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After the death of her grandmother Bella Swan inherits millions of dollars. Following the advice of her father, the young editor of the Seattle Times plans to invest a good part of her money and starts looking for real estates and promising establishments. It is her friend Alice, however, who leads Bella into the right direction. Her boyfriend Jasper and his two friends Emmett and Edward plan to open a gentlemen's club - a high class strip club. Though Bella feels a little overwhelmed in the beginning she can definitely see a lot of potential. So without further ado, she becomes the main investor of "The Tripple Crown Club".

From then on, Bella becomes a regular visitor at the construction site and helps out wherever and whenever she can. She feels an especially strong attraction towards Edward, who is responsible for hiring the staff and keeping the everyday business of the club running later on. He also tends to lose his temper rather quickly, which becomes a real problem for Bella. The two fight like wild cats and desperately try to oppress the growing crave they feel for each other. Things escalade when Edward finds out that the woman he cannot get out of his head has a business relationship with his despised father Carlisle. The ultimate showdown eventually happens during a common dinner. Without Edward's knowledge Carlisle invited Bella hoping the two could reconcile a little. But Edward behaves like a stubborn child and Bella has finally enough...

As Bare All is cutestkidsmom's first fanfiction it is not free from flaws. The story was published unbeta'd and therefore contains a lot of typos and grammatical mistakes. It is a little bit frustrating in the beginning but the interesting plot and likeable characters make up for that. Yes, Alice might be a little over the top and Bella a tad bit too impulsive but no one was born a bestselling author, right!? I can only encourage you to not put the story away just because a comma is missing. The author's writing style improves from chapter to chapter and the characters become more and more defined. By not reading Bare All you would miss out on a wonderful story full of humor, drama, and some nicely written lemons - do you really want that?

Bare All consists of 46 chapters and 116,672 words. The story is rated M for language and lemons.

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