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Sunday, May 5, 2013

"Negative Twenty and Falling" by katinki

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Bella is on her way to Canada to spend her spring break with her best friend Alice, her boyfriend Jasper, her brother's Edward and Emmett, as well as Emmett's wife Rosalie. They will share a cabin together and enjoy the winter. Too bad that Bella is used to living in Arizona and minus 20° Celsius (damn Canadians and their metrical system) is a tid bit too cold for her.

It doesn't make things easier that she has been pining for Alice's older brother Edward for years. Everytime the two meet, Bella is mesmerized by his perfect physique, starts to swoon whenever he smiles, and nearly melts with each eye contact. Yet a certain lack of self esteem and thousands of miles keep her from confessing her feelings. While Bella will start college at Northwestern, Edward will finish his medical degree in Colorado. At least, that's what she thinks...

katinki's one shot is full of humor and sarcasm. Our little Bella is more than suffering from the cold weather conditions in Canada and it is too cute to read about her stopped up Rudolph-the-red-nose-reindeer-like nose, her falling on her butt on more than one occasion and using said behind to slide ungracefully down hills and slopes. When Edward finally gets her alone in the hot tub, however, things are a lot less funny and a little bit more heated!

Negative Twenty and Falling is a one shot consisting of 18,997 words. The story is rated M for foul language and adult situations.

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