"Felt" by LayAtHomeMom

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What’s that thing they say about teenagers? They’re young, dumb, and full of cum. Crude? Yes. True? Usually. Most of us know what it’s like to be on the verge of adulthood. We love hard and play harder without truly understanding the consequences behind our actions, and it’s that inexperience—that we don’t want to really realize about ourselves—that holds us back. Edward and Bella were a summer romance, separated during the year by distance and doubt and too-immature minds filled with painful words and guarded hearts. Fueled by the power to hurt and the need to feel, their relationship was broken by a misunderstanding and the refusal to communicate. It’s five years later when they find their second chance. Together once again, it only takes a few shots, a rendezvous into the past, and some careful chosen dirty words before Bella is spread out on the pool table with Edward above her and panting. But where does this leave them? Is it the closure they never had or the rekindling of something great?

Felt was LayAtHomeMom’s entry for the Dirty Talkin’ Edward Twific Contest, and we were lucky enough to be graced with a two-part continuum. I can’t compare her entry to the others—because I don’t think I’ve read any of them—but she did deliver in my opinion because ohemgee this Edward and that mouth. Soap. It needs lots of soap. I mean seriously. Pant. Pant. Pant. You want a short, smexy read? This story is for you. Dirty talk is a secret love of mine. Probably because I can’t read it or think it or say it out loud without feeling incredibly awkward and self-conscious, and oh my goodness, if you could only see my blush. If there’s one thing to know about me, it might be that I like to read aloud and act out the characters because dialogue can be so much fun. Now I dare you to read this sexy out loud. Told from Bella’s POV, we see mostly her struggle with her acceptance of the relationship and her own reservations, but we do get a good look into Edward’s side. Even though it has been five years and they may be a tad bit older and wiser, these two still have a lot to work out. The original one-shot gives the sexy, but the continuation gives the story, and thank goodness for that because I seriously don’t know what I would have done if it had ended with, “So where does this leave us now?” So here’s the question of the day. Dirty talk…which bit was your favorite or what would you add?

Felt consists of 3 chapters and 19,378 words. It’s rated MA for foul language and sexual content. Go check out the fabulous video (you-tube link below) that Smith-Patterson made for this story!

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