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Sunday, April 6, 2014

"Nothing to Declare" by lellabeth

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Going through security checkpoints can be hard, especially when you have piercings in places other than your ears. Bella Swan knows this more than anyone. When she's stopped and asked to go through the metal detector - again and again - the last thing she wants is a pat-down from the pimply, overeager airport worker that keeps eyeing her. After request that a female worker executes the pat-down, Bella's led to wait-in a room. Minutes pass, no one shows up, and Bella grows more and more frustrated. All she wants it to get on the plane and go see her mother. However, when the door finally opens and she hears a deep, male voice everything changes. Suddenly, Bella would love nothing more than to spend the next couple hours in the room with this incredibly attractive, strong-looking airport police officer with killer sex-hair. A couple of clarifications and sexual innuendos later, will these two strangers be able to resist the inexplicable draw they feel towards one another? For Edward, will the lines of professionalism be blurred when it comes to this snarky brunette? Will Bella be able to seduce the attractive airport worker?

If you're looking for something serious and intense, then Nothing to Declare is not for you. It's fun, lighthearted, and a good story to go to read some hot lemons. I think that's the way lellabeth intended it to be, as well. I love one-shots that feel resolved when I'm done reading them. I definitely got that feeling from Nothing to Declare. There's a billion places that this story can go, but this one-shot more than satisfies my curiosity. I think it takes true talent to make the reader feel like a one-shot is complete and there is nothing more left to tell, so kudos to lellabeth for doing just that! She's a great writer whose writing style can be characterized easy-to-read and entertaining. It's simple, not too sophisticated, yet beautiful and creative. Bella's inner monologue is always entertaining and this story includes one of the hottest, most extroverted Edwards I've read. Their chemistry is palpable from the moment they meet and lasts throughout the entire story. Light, quirky, and playful, Nothing to Declare is a breath of fresh air for those who need a break from the seriousness of life. Definitely a go-to read for the days you're feeling down!

Nothing to Declare is a one-shot and consists of 4,447 words. This story is rated MA for language and super hot lemons.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9142276/1/Nothing-to-Declarehttps://fictionpad.com/author/lellabeth/stories/11442/Nothing-to-Declare


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