"Do the Right Thing" by LyricalKris

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Agent Edward Cullen was a well-respected FBI agent. Together with his hand-in-hand partner, Agent Jasper Hale, he had always been able to solve cases successfully. But when he takes over a case that requires catching two members of one of the most dangerous criminal gangs in town, Edward definitely didn't expect his life to turn upside down! On the first day of his mission, he becomes the witness of how a beautiful brunette breaks up with none other than Jacob Black, a guy pivotal for the successful closing of the case. Said brunette soon becomes an important help to the FBI: even though Bella Swan had just ditched Jacob she now agrees to pretend to make up with him in order to help Edward and Jasper to gain some useful information. What no one considers, however, is the immense attraction between Edward and Bella that should soon turn into real love. As the two FBI agents have to take care of Bella's security 24/7, they are constantly keeping an eye on her. For Edward, seeing how his girl is sweet-talking Jacob, is less than thrilling and is playing with his patience. Then, the bust suddenly goes astray, leaving Jacob dead and Bella in the hospital. Edward is shocked to find out that the love of his life is not only six weeks pregnant with his child but also suffers from amnesia. Will Edward be able to bring Bella's memories back while also solving the case?

As with most of her stories, LyricalKris' Do the Right Thing has you hooked from chapter one! This mind-blowing fanfic starts out with Edward learning about Bella's serious condition in the hospital. Until chapter ten, each chapter is divided into two parts: the first being about the past, with all the events leading up to the failed bust, and the second dealing with the current situation and Bella's recovery. Despite this rather unusual structure, the author manages to grab the readers attention and creates a lot of suspense by only giving away one piece of information after the other.  Furthermore, the story is entirely in third perspective, which the author uses to its benefit and allows the reader to get in everyone's heads really well. You will spend a lot of time on trying to put the puzzle pieces together and probably won't be able to stop reading the story until you find out exactly what happened to Bella and how! I can also guarantee that you will fall in love with hot FBIward in this story as well as Bella, who remains positive and strong throughout the whole story despite her initial loss of senses.
This is a beautiful story that will have you at the ends of your seats! So much enigma, so much romance (hot ones, at that!), and a sexy Edward - what else do you need in a fantastic story? A must read that shouldn't be as overlooked! 

Do the Right Thing consists of 32 chapters and 132,340 words. The story is rated M for language and sexual activities/references. 

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