"Emergency" by EJ Santry
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If Bella Swan needed to be described in one word, it would be clumsy. The young student has had so many accidents in her life that she has seen the emergency rooms of various hospitals more often than other people change their underwear. One day, after having slipped on the sidewalk while taking the trash out to the dumpster, Bella drags herself to the ER, fearing that she might have broken her tailbone. So there she is: trying to somehow sit in the examination room and waiting for a doctor to arrive.
She didn't expect to meet what was probably the most handsome man in the world: a god-like creature with bronze hair, the greenest eyes she had ever seen and a wonderful and sexy crooked grin on his face. After drooling over her white knight in shining armour Bella suddenly realizes that this epitome of manliness will need to have to have to take a look at her behind. Her very bare behind, because Dr. Adonis asks her only seconds later to get out of her clothes and change into a hospital gown. And as if something in her clicks or some inner voice gives her a pep talk, Bella begins removing her clothes one by one, almost in a stripper-like fashion. Affected by her obvious seduction, the doctor, whose name is actually Dr. Cullen as she later finds out, hastily drags her to an empty room where he finally can have his way with her.
Our clumsy little Bella is really cute and funny in this wonderfully written one-shot by EJ Santry. Though it is pretty obvious from the beginning that things between Edward and Bella will get very hot very soon, the plot is neither boring nor too predictable. Furthermore, I personally think it was a good decision of the author to not end the story after Bella and Edward's sexual encounter but giving a small glimpse into their future. This way the reader gets to know whether they will see each other again and if they will be able and willing to start a relationship. Emergency is a very well-written story that will be especially benefitting to those of you who don't have much time to read a multi-chapter story yet still want to read about Bella and Edward hitting it off!
Emergency is a one-shot and consists of 6,936 words. The story is rated M for lemons.
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