"Blind Spot" by FictionFreak95

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After Chicago police officer Edward Cullen fails to rescue a young girl from her kidnapper and later loses his brother Garrett by what looks like a mistake on his part, he decides to quit his job. Looking for absolute quietude and a place where no one knows him, he arrives at the small town of Madisonville, Louisiana. There he rents an old house boat and meets a rather snappy, yet beautiful young woman.

Bella Swan inherited a rare and exceptional gift from her mother: she receives visions. Though she can neither control them nor does she always know what they mean, Bella pretty much follows her inner voice and thoughts. When she encounters Edward she notices how broken and tired the young man looks. In order to forget the pain of his past, the former police officer drinks himself into oblivion and reacts rudely to every attempt at friendship or closeness. Yet when Bella has a vision concerning Garrett and a victim of one of Edward's former cases, he has no choice but to face his inner demons.

Blind Spot is amazingly well written. Though this story contains some supernatural aspects it never gets weird or fantastic. Bella's visions are the only thing that give the reader some clue about what happened between Garrett and Edward. Because Bella only sees blurry and incoherent images, questions that inevitably arise within the reader are only answered gradually. That makes this story incredibly exciting and interesting. You're probably not going to be able to stop reading until you reached the end.

Blind Spot consists of 27 chapters and a total of 169,531 words. All characters are human, however the story contains slightly supernatural elements. The fanfiction is rated M for mature content.

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