"Family of Perfection" by DazzlinSparkle05

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Bella and Edward know each other since high school. While Bella developed some kind of crush on her best friend, Edward didn't seem to feel the same. After a night of too much partying, the two sleep with each other and Bella gets pregnant. Nine months later, Mackenzie Carlie Cullen is born and has been keeping her parents busy ever since.

Though Edward and Bella are not romantically involved they live together for the sake of their daughter. Bella has been harboring deep feelings for the father of her child, but is convinced that Edward doesn't feel the same. And because of Edward's job as a freelance photographer (which forces him to travel more than spending time at home), she knows that any kind of bonding would be immensely difficult, if not close to impossible...

Family of Perfection is nicely written and very emotional. The characters are spot on - especially the interactions between Edward, Bella, and their daughter are sweet and adorable. You just can't help but desperately wish that the three can finally manage to become a real family!

Family of Perfection consists of  45 chapter and a total of 114,387 words. All characters are human. The story is rated M for mature content.

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